Thomas the Rhymer
Sir Thomas de Ercildoun, better remembered as Thomas the Rhymer, also known as Thomas Learmont or True Thomas, was a Scottish laird and reputed prophet from Earlston in the Borders. Thomas' gift of prophecy is linked to his poetic ability.
He is often cited as the author of the English Sir Tristrem, a version of the Tristram legend, and some lines in Robert Mannyng's Chronicle may be the source of this association. It is not clear if the name Rhymer was his actual surname or merely a sobriquet.
In literature, he appears as the protagonist in the tale about Thomas the Rhymer carried off by the "Queen of Elfland" and returned having gained the gift of prophecy, as well as the inability to tell a lie. The tale survives in a medieval verse romance in five manuscripts, as well as in the popular ballad "Thomas Rhymer". The romance occurs as "Thomas off Ersseldoune" in the Lincoln Thornton Manuscript.
The original romance ca. 1400 was probably condensed into ballad form ca. 1700, though there are dissenting views on this. Walter Scott expanded the ballad into three parts, adding a sequel which incorporated the prophecies ascribed to Thomas, and an epilogue where Thomas is summoned back to Elfland after the appearance of a sign, in the form of the milk-white hart and. Numerous prose retellings of the tale of Thomas the Rhymer have been undertaken, and included in fairy tale or folk-tale anthologies; these often incorporate the return to Fairyland episode that Scott reported to have learned from local legend.
Historical figure
Sir Thomas was born in Erceldoune, Berwickshire, sometime in the 13th century, and has a reputation as the author of many prophetic verses. Little is known for certain of his life but two charters from 1260–80 and 1294 mention him, the latter referring to "Thomas de Ercildounson son and heir of Thome Rymour de Ercildoun".Thomas became known as "True Thomas", supposedly because he could not tell a lie. Popular lore recounts how he prophesied many great events in Scottish history, including the death of Alexander III of Scotland.
Popular esteem of Thomas lived on for centuries after his death, and especially in Scotland, overtook the reputation of all rival prophets including Merlin, whom the 16th century pamphleteer of The Complaynt of Scotland denounced as the author of the prophecy which the English used as justification for aggression against his countrymen. It became common for fabricated prophecies to be attributed to Thomas to enhance their authority, as seen in collections of prophecies which were printed, the earliest surviving being a chapbook entitled "The Whole Prophecie of Scotland, England, etc.".
Prophecies attributed to Thomas
Descriptions and paraphrases of Thomas's prophecies were given by various Scottish historians of yore, though none of them quoted directly from Thomas.- "On the morrow, afore noon, shall blow the greatest wind that ever was heard before in Scotland."
- "Who shal rule the ile of Bretaine / From the North to the South sey?"
Popular folkloric prophecies
- "At Eildon Tree, if yon shall be,
- "This Thorn-Tree, as lang as it stands,
- "When the Yowes o' Gowrie come to land,
- "York was, London is, and Edinbruch 'ill be,
- "Fyvie, Fyvie thou'se never thrive,
- "Betide, betide, whate'er betide,
Ballad
Child provided a critical synopsis comparing versions A, B, C in his original publication, and considerations for the D, E versions have been augmented [|below].
Ballad synopsis
The brief outline of the ballad is that while Thomas is lying outdoors on a slope by a tree in the Erceldoune neighborhood, the queen of Elfland appears to him riding upon a horse and beckons him to come away. When he consents, she shows him three marvels: the road to Heaven, the road to Hell, and the road to her own world. After seven years, Thomas is brought back into the mortal realm. Asking for a token by which to remember the queen, he is offered the choice of having powers of harpistry, or else of prophecy, and of these he chooses the latter.The scene of Thomas's encounter with the elf-queen is "Huntly Bank" and the "Eildon Tree" or "Farnalie" All these refer to the area of Eildon Hills, in the vicinity of Earlston: Huntly Bank was a slope on the hill and the tree stood there also, as Scott explained: Emily B. Lyle was able to localize "farnalie" there as well.
The queen wears a skirt of grass-green silk and a velvet mantle, and is mounted either on a milk-white steed, or on a dapple-gray horse. The horse has nine and fifty bells on each on its mane in A, nine hung on its mane in E, and three bells on either side of the bridle in R, whereas she had nine bells in her hand in D, offered as a prize for his harping and .
Thomas mistakenly addresses her as the "Queen of Heaven", which she corrects by identifying herself as "Queen of fair Elfland". In other variants, she reticently identifies herself only as "lady of an land", or "lady gay", much like the medieval romance. But since the unnamed land of the queen is approached by a path leading neither to Heaven nor Hell, etc., it can be assumed to be "Fairyland," to put it in more modern terminology.
In C and E, the queen dares Thomas to kiss her lips, a corruption of Thomas's embrace in the romance that is lacking in A and B though crucial to a cogent plot, since "it is contact with the fairy that gives her the power to carry her paramour off" according to Child. Absent in the ballads also is the motif of the queen losing her beauty : Child considered that the "ballad is no worse, and the romance would have been much better" without it, "impressive" though it may be, since it did not belong in his opinion to the "proper and original story," which he thought was a blithe tale like that of Ogier the Dane and Morgan le fay. If he chooses to go with her, Thomas is warned he will be unable to return for seven years. In the romance the queen's warning is "only for a twelvemonth", but he overstays by more than three years.
Then she wheels around her milk-white steed and lets Thomas ride on the behind, or she rides the dapple-gray while he runs. He must wade knee-high through a river, exaggerated as an expanse of blood, in A. They reach a "garden green," and Thomas wants to pluck a fruit to slake his hunger but the queen interrupts, admonishing him that he will be accursed or damned. The language in B suggests this is "the fruit of the Forbidden Tree", and variants D, E call it an apple. The queen provides Thomas with food to sate his hunger.
The queen now tells Thomas to lay his head to rest on her knee, and shows him three marvels, which are the road to Hell, the road to Heaven, and the road to her homeland. It is the road beyond the meadow or lawn overgrown with lilies that leads to Heaven, except in C where the looks deceive and the lily road leads to Hell, while the thorny road leads to Heaven.
The queen instructs Thomas not to speak to others in Elfland, and to allow her to do all the talking. In the end, he receives as present "a coat of the even cloth, and a pair of shoes of velvet green" or "tongue that can never lie" or both. Version E uniquely mentions the Queen's fear that Thomas may be chosen as " unto hell", that is to say, the in the form of humans that Elfland is obliged to pay periodically. In the romance, the Queen explains that the collection of the "fee to hell" draws near, and Thomas must be sent back to earth to spare him from that peril.
Ballad sources
The ballad was first printed by Walter Scott, and then by Robert Jamieson. Both used Mrs. Brown's manuscript as the underlying source. Child A is represented by Mrs. Brown's MS. and Jamieson's published version. Child C is a composite of Mrs. Brown's and another version. In fact, 13 of the 20 stanzas are the same as A, and although Scott claims his version is from a "copy, obtained from a lady residing not far from Ercildoun" corrected using Mrs. Brown's MS., Nelson labels the seven different stanzas as something that is "for most part Scott's own, Gothic-romantic invention".Child B is taken from the second volume of the Campbell manuscripts entitled "Old Scottish Songs, Collected in the Counties of Berwick, Roxburgh, Selkirk & Peebles", dating to ca. 1830. The Leyden transcript, or Child "D" was supplied to Walter Scott before his publication, and influenced his composition of the C version to some degree. The text by Mrs. Christiana Greenwood, or Child "E" was "sent to Scott in May of 1806 after reading his C version in the Minstrelsey, and was dated by Nelson as an "early to mid-eighteenth-century text". These two versions were provided to Scott and were among his papers at Abbotsford.
Mrs. Brown's ballads
Mrs. Brown, aka Anna Gordon or Mrs. Brown of Falkland, who was both Scott's and Jamieson's source, maintained that she had heard them sung to her as a child. She had learned to sing a repertoire of some three dozen ballads from her aunt, Mrs. Farquheson. Mrs. Brown's nephew Robert Eden Scott transcribed the music, and the manuscript was available to Scott and others. However different accounts have been given, such as "an old maid-servant who had been long as the nursemaid being the one to teach Mrs. Brown."Walter Scott's ballads in three parts
In Minstrelsy, Walter Scott published a second part to the ballad out of Thomas's prophecies, and yet a third part describing Thomas's return to Elfland. The third part was based on the legend with which Scott claimed to be familiar, telling that "while Thomas was making merry with his friends in the Tower of Ercildoune," there came news that "a hart and hind... was parading the street of the village." Hearing this, Thomas got up and left, never to be seen again, leaving a popular belief that he had gone to Fairyland but was "one day expected to revisit earth". Murray cites Robert Chambers's suspicion that this may have been a mangled portrayal of a living local personage, and gives his own less marvellous traditional account of Thomas's disappearance, as he had received it from an informant.In Walter Scott's "Third Part" to the ballad, Thomas finds himself in possession of a "elfin harp he won" in Fairyland in a minstrel competition. This is a departure both from the traditional ballad and from the medieval romance, in which the queen tells Thomas to choose whether "to harpe or carpe," that is, to make a choice either of the gift of music or of the gift of speech. The "hart and hind" is now being sung as being "white as snow on Fairnalie". Some prose retellings incorporate some features derived from this third part.
Medieval romance
The surviving medieval romance is a lengthier account which agrees with the content of the ballad.The romance opens in the first person, but probably is not genuinely Thomas's own work. Murray dated the authorship to "shortly after 1400, or about a hundred years after Thomas's death", but more recent researchers set the date earlier, to the 14th century. The romance often alludes to "the story," as if there had been a preceding recension, and Child supposed that the "older story," if any such thing actually existed, "must be the work of Thomas".
As in ballad C, Huntley banks is the locale where Thomas made sighting of the elfin lady. The "Eldoune, Eldone tree " is also mentioned as in the ballad. Thomas is captivated by her, addressing her as queen of heaven, and she answers she is not so lofty, but hints she is of fairy kind. Thomas makes proposition, but she warns him off saying that the slightest sin will undo her beauty. Thomas is undaunted, so she gives the "Mane of Molde" consent to marry her and to accompany her.
"Seven tymes by hyr he lay,", but she transforms into a hideous hag immediately after lying with him, and declares he shall not see "" for a twelvemonth. As in the ballad, the lady points out one way towards heaven and another towards hell during their journey to her dominion. The lady is followed by grayhounds and "raches" . On arrival, Thomas is entertained with food and dancing, but then the lady tells him he must leave. To Thomas, his sojourn seems to last for only three days, but the lady tells him that three years, or seven years, have passed , and he is brought back to the Elidon tree.
Fytte II is mostly devoted to prophecies. In the opening, Thomas asks for a token by which to remember the queen, and she offers him the choice of becoming a harper or a prophet. Rather than the "instrumental" gift, Thomas opts for the "vocal accomplishments." Thomas asks her to abide a bit and tell him some ferlys. She now starts to tell of future battles at Halidon Hill, Bannockburn, etc., which are easily identifiable historic engagements.
The prophecies of battles continue into Fytte III, but the language becomes symbolic. Near the end Thomas asks why Black Agnes of Dunbar imprisoned him, and she predicts her death. This mention of Black Agnes is an anachronism, Thomas of Erceldoune having lived a whole generation before her, and she was presumably confused with an earlier Countess of the March.
Manuscript sources
The medieval romance survives complete or in fragments in five manuscripts, the earliest of which is the Lincoln codex compiled by Robert Thornton:- Thornton MS. - ca. 1430–1440.
- MS. Cambridge Ff. 5, 48 - mid 15th century.
- MS. Cotton Vitellius E. x., - late 15th century.
- MS. Landsowne 762 - ca. 1524–30
- MS. Sloane 2578 MSS. - 1547. Lacks first fitt.
The Cotton MS. gives an "Incipit prophecia Thome Arseldon" and an " prophetia thome de Arseldoune", thus this was the version that Walter Scott excerpted as Appendix. The Sloan MS. begins the second fytte with: "Heare begynethe þe ijd fytt I saye / of Sir thomas of Arseldon," and the Thornton MS. gives the " Thomas Of Erseldowne" after the 700th line.
Relationship between romance and ballad forms
The romance dates from the late 14th to the early 15th century, while the ballad texts available do not antedate ca. 1700-1750 at the earliest. The preponderance of opinion seems to be that the romance gave rise to the ballads at a relatively late date, though some disagree with this view.Walter Scott stated that the romance was "the undoubted original", the ballad versions having been corrupted "with changes by oral tradition". Murray flatly dismisses this inference of oral transmission, characterizing the ballad as a modernization by a contemporary versifier. Privately, Scott also held his "suspicion of modern manufacture."
C. E. Nelson argued for a common archetype, composed around the year 1700 by "a literate individual of antiquarian bent" living in Berwickshire. Nelson starts off with a working assumption that the archetype ballad, "a not too remote ancestor of Greenwood" was "purposefully reduced from the romance". What made his argument convincing was his observation that the romance was actually "printed as late as the seventeenth century", a fact missed by several commentators and not noticed in Murray's "Published Texts" section.
The localization of the archetype to Berwickshire is natural because the Greenwood group of ballads belong to this area, and because this was the native place of the traditionary hero, Thomas of Erceldoune. Having made his examination, Nelson declared that his assumptions were justified by evidence, deciding in favour of the "eighteenth-century origin and the subsequent tradition of 'Thomas Rhymer'", a conclusion applicable not only to the Greenwood group of ballads but also to the Brown group. This view is followed by Katharine Mary Briggs's folk-tale dictionary of 1971, and David Fowler.
From the opposite point of view, Child thought that the ballad "must be of considerable age", even though the earliest available to him was datable only to ca. 1700–1750. E. B. Lyle, who has published extensively on Thomas the Rhymer, presents the hypothesis that the ballad had once existed in a very early form upon which the romance was based as its source. One supporter of this view is Helen Cooper who remarks that the ballad "has one of the strongest claims to medieval origins"; another is Richard Firth Green who states that "continuous oral transmission is the only credible explanation". However, both Cooper and Green draw these conclusions under the mistaken assumption that the "romance... had not yet been printed at the time of Mrs Brown's performance".
Literary criticism
In the romance, the queen declares that Thomas has stayed three years but can remain no longer, because "the foul fiend of Hell will come among the folk and fetch his fee". This "fee" "refers to the common belief that the fairies "paid kane" to hell, by the sacrifice of one or more individuals to the devil every seventh year." The situation is akin to the one presented to the title character of "Tam Lin" who is in the company of the Queen of Fairies, but says he fears he will be given up as the tithe paid to hell. The common motif has been identified as type F.257 "Tribute taken from fairies by fiend at stated periods" except that while Tam Lin must devise his own rescue, in the case of the Rymer, "the kindly queen of the fairies will not allow Thomas of Erceldoune to be exposed to this peril, and hurries him back to earth the day before the fiend comes for his due". J. R. R. Tolkien also alludes to the "Devil's tithe" as concerns the Rhymer's tale in a passing witty remarkInfluences
It has been suggested that John Keats's poem La Belle Dame sans Merci borrows motif and structure from the legend of Thomas the Rhymer.Washington Irving, while visiting Walter Scott, was told the legend of Thomas the Rhymer, and it became one of the sources for Irving's short story Rip van Winkle.
Adaptations
Retellings
There have been numerous prose retelling of the ballad or legend.John Tillotson's version with "magic harp he had won in Elfland" and Elizabeth W. Greierson's version with "harp that was fashioned in Fairyland" are couple of examples that incorporate the theme from Scott's Part Three of Thomas vanishing back to Elfland after the sighting of a hart and hind in town.
Barbara Ker Wilson's retold tale of "Thomas the Rhymer" is a patchwork of all the traditions accrued around Thomas, including ballad and prophecies both written and popularly held.
Additional, non-exhaustive list of retellings as follows:
- Donald Alexander Macleod, Arthur George Walker "Story of Thomas the Rhymer".
- Gibbings & Co., publishers.
- Mary MacGregor, Katharine Cameron .
- Donald Alexander Mackenzie, John Duncan, "Story of Thomas the Rhymer".
- George Douglas, James Torrance, in Scottish Fairy Tales.
- Judy Paterson, Sally J. Collins .
Musical adaptations
- The German version of Tom der Reimer by Theodor Fontane was set as a song for male voice and piano by Carl Loewe, his op. 135.
- *An outstanding early recording, in German is by Heinrich Schlusnus, on Polydor 67212, of 1938.
- Modern versions of the "Thomas the Rhymer" ballad include renditions by British folk rock act Steeleye Span which recorded two different versions for their 1974 album Now We Are Six and another for Present--The Very Best of Steeleye Span, released in 2002. Singer Ewan MacColl has also recorded his version of the ballad.
- The English composer Ralph Vaughan Williams left an opera by the title of Thomas the Rhymer incomplete at the time of his death in 1958. The libretto was a collaboration between the composer and his second wife, Ursula Vaughan Williams, and it was based upon the ballads of Thomas the Rhymer and Tam Lin.
- The British country/acid house band Alabama 3 drew upon the ballad of Thomas the Rhymer in a 2003 recording entitled Yellow Rose. Alabama 3's lyrics give the ballad a new setting in the American frontier of the 19th Century, where an enchanting woman lures the narrator to a night of wild debauchery, then robs and finally murders him. Yellow Rose appears on their 2003 album Power in the Blood.
- Kray Van Kirk's Creative Commons-licensed song "The Queen of Elfland", for which Van Kirk also created a music video, retells the story in a modern setting.
Thomas in literature and theatre
- Rudyard Kipling's poem, "The Last Rhyme of True Thomas", features Thomas Learmounth and a king who's going to make Thomas his knight.
- John Geddie, Thomas the Rymour and his Rhymes. , Edinburgh: Printed for the Rymour Club and issued from John Knox's House, 1920.
- In William Croft Dickinson's children book The Eildon Tree, two modern children meeting Thomas the Rhymer and travel back in time to a critical point in Scottish history.
- Thomas is one of the main characters of Alexander Reid's play The Lass wi the Muckle Mou.
- Nigel Tranter, Scottish writer authored the novel True Thomas.
- Ellen Kushner's novel Thomas the Rhymer.
- Bruce Glassco's short story "True Thomas", in Ellen Datlow and Terri Windling's anthology Black Swan, White Raven. Like the other stories presented there, the Glasco story put a new spin on the legend.
- "Erceldoune", a novella by Richard Leigh, features a folk-singer named Thomas "Rafe" Erlston. The novella appeared in the collection
- In Sergey Lukyanenko's fantasy novel The Last Watch, Thomas is described as having survived until today and currently occupies the post of the Head of the Scottish Night Watch.
- Thomas appears in John Leyland's ballad "Lord Soulis". Here, after failing to bind William II de Soules with magical ropes of sand, he determines that the sorcerer must be wrapped in lead and boiled.
- Thomas the Rhymer is a major character in Andrew James Greig's novel "One is One" ,, where Thomas is a man lost to himself and to time as he roams Scotland in the present day.
- Acclaimed fantasy writer Diana Wynne Jones' young adult novel Fire and Hemlock draws from the ballad in a story set in the present day.
Representations in fine art
- Thomas the Rhymer and the Queen of Faerie, by Joseph Noel Paton illustrated the ballad. A print reproduction by by John Le Conte was published W & A K Johnston,.
- Beverly Nichols' A Book of Old Ballads reprinted the Greenwood version of the ballad, with a print of "Thomas the Rhymer" by H. M. Brock
Footnotes